Window light and Self portrait
Tuesday, January 22, 2008
My window light and self portrait. Self portrait is my first stab at compositing. Let me know whatcha think!
posted by Mark Denman @ 10:44 AM,
6 Comments:
- At January 22, 2008 11:06 AM, Wayne Wallace said...
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Mark,
I like both esp. your self portrait, that's a cool idea!
On the window portrait that little black object on the window sill is distracting and I'd like to see a little more in the direction she is looking.
Keep up the great work! - At January 22, 2008 12:44 PM, Krisandra said...
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The self portrait is AMAZING! Great idea and execution. Very nice Mark.
- At January 22, 2008 1:35 PM, said...
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Mark - the self portrait is excellent - very creative and well executed. Nice job!
- At January 22, 2008 6:24 PM, Susan McManus said...
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Mark, the self-portrait is amazing - creative and well-executed to quote the others. Your window light shot is nice. I'm a little distracted by the part in her hair. I would try cropping in just a bit or burning just the skin in the part a bit. By the way, as of now I'm coming to Hallmark on March 4th with Lois Greenfield. So, look for me. Keep up the good work.. I KNEW you'd do well at Hallmark.
- At January 22, 2008 7:18 PM, Jessi Lee Heeb said...
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I like the self-portrait..very matrix-ish looking...lol.
- At January 23, 2008 10:08 AM, Mark Denman said...
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I appreciate the critique. Cropping and identifying distractions in camera is a constant work-in-progess.
Susan, glad to hear your coming in March. Look forward to seeing you.