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Thursday, June 5, 2008

Hello Hipsters,

Shot with my target yesterday. here are some results enjoy and comment!! i want to hear what you have to say i love feed back and i feel like im not getting enough of it!








posted by Nemesis Photo @ 10:58 AM,

2 Comments:

At June 5, 2008 11:39 AM, Anonymous Twix said...

Nice work...Here are a few thoughts.
Photo #2 - good movement, but be careful of her arm placement. Her arm in the right of the frame looks shortened and broader than if she were pointing her elbow more to the side. She obviously has nicely shaped arms as you can see in the other pics, but this one looks a little compacted.

Photo #6 - the lighting on her is good, but I don't feel like the background adds anything - the lighting in the background could be punched up and made more dramatic.

Photo #7 - good angle, looks like a little bit of a wider angle lens. Would be good to play with depth of field more so her face is the only thing in true sharp focus. I think you'd see that your eye would go to her more quickly than wander the setting.

Otherwise, good use of different poses and looks from your model. It looks like a fun session!

 
At June 5, 2008 6:39 PM, Blogger Nemesis Photo said...

hey thanks.. she was working it for photo number 2. and the dof on #7 thats at 2.8 but thats what happens with a fisheye.... thanks for your words it was fun!!!

 

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