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Sunday, December 14, 2008

Environmental still life


Still life w/ props


Conceptual still life

Pls leave some feedback...I needs some.

It's my first time...but don't be too gentile haha.

posted by bryutas @ 7:18 PM,

3 Comments:

At December 15, 2008 6:14 AM, Blogger kameron said...

Hi Bryan,

I think your environmental still is on the right track. I like the contrast of the blue light outside with the warm light inside (although I'd play with the ratio a little more).

I don't think the composition is bad, but it makes the candle the central interest point of your image and I'm not sure if it's the most interesting thing there. If I were you, I'd try switching the placement of the candle with the wine glass and bottle (maybe get a different kind of candle and/or more of them) and see if I could back-light the glass and add another layer of dimension to reward the viewer.

Hope that helps!

 
At December 15, 2008 1:38 PM, Blogger Jacquie Van Tichelt said...

Yes I agree with Kameron. I love the other stills you have here very very nice. I love the light on the screw ball, and I love how sharp everything is in that other thing....sorry I don't know what it is, but it is a very very nice shot.

 
At December 15, 2008 3:16 PM, Blogger Bryan Bayutas said...

Thanks for the comments.

Dick was actually the one who set it up that way lol. I just kinda went with it. I do agree that I need to work on the environmental one's lighting colors and whatnot, but all in all, I had fun with it.

Thanks again.

 

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